Monday, February 13, 2012

Warm Rain

DAY-2

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Tears
like 
warm rain
cascade down
my pain-kissed sad eyes;
soothe the scalded sore
thats's burning
inside
my 
heart

8 comments:

  1. So true!
    This relates a lot to me.
    This couldn't be defined any better.
    Good Job dear.

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  2. "my pain-kissed sad eyes" I really liked this!
    Beautiful and touching composition indeed:)

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  3. Beautiful expression...When it comes to the word 'tear', you weave magical words...

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  4. @Pooja Tears do soothe the burns that scald our insides dont they? glad you liked this... :)

    @Tarang Thank you. I am glad you found this touching. :)

    @saru di Morbid poetry has got something to do with me i guess!! thank you for liking this! :)

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  5. Ah. Fibbo. Love them.
    Sometimes tears do help...i wished they helped me. Or rather even came to me.
    Lovely poem :-)

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  6. Wonderful play of words, the pain is deeply expressed in just a few heartfelt words.. lovely!

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  7. Beautifully expressed. The tears do help us to lighten our souls a bit.
    Your poems are fabulous NS, Keep up:)

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  8. @Antara sorry couldnt call you yesterdya. i fell sick myself :P and why so much agony dear?

    @Arti Di thank you so much!! love ya!

    @DS Thanks a million. real happy you liked this one :)

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