Friday, February 24, 2012

In nature's arms...

Photo taken from here

Can I sleep here
in this quiet bower
listen to your breeze
sing a lovely tune?
so tired of electronic hums
screaming in my ears...

Can I breathe here
in this peaceful dream
float awhile
 in your smiling waters?
so tired of reality
crushing me beneath tears...

Can I live here
in this breathtaking green
become just
 a blade of grass you sheath?
so tired of love's burden
caging me with my fears...

I  just need
 a moment with you
can you take my tears
in your bubbling brook?
I need just a place to cry,
a place where
 I can close my eyes
and dream of sweet nothings.
and escape from myself
to become a part of you..


11 comments:

  1. Wonderful composition and beautiful picture!:)

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  2. Wonderfully written yet again NS!!
    Nature is such, always peace and calm infusing and a minute in its lap takes all the worries away!
    PS - Please remove the word verification as now two words come and it is very irritating. You can instead moderate comments.

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  3. A spectacular one again.
    You took us on a nature journey with this :).
    Too good <3

    PS. Don't start moderating comments :( They always bug me..

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  4. In the weirdest manner...i read the first stanza and instantly got reminded of Krittika. :-P

    And by the way...WONDERFUL. Love this one. The flow was absolutely lovely.

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  5. wonderful lines with a beautiful picture

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  6. @tarang thanks a lot! glad you like the photo :)

    @DS i have removed the word verification altogether.no moderation also. hope it is working though... I know its very irritating :P
    and yes, nature is such, it acts as a balm in times of despair! thanks! :)

    @Pooja I am glad you experienced the journey i did while writing this! cheers!

    @Antara Krittika?? why so?? and btw i wrote a short story yesterday(phir se Abhi and krittika :P :P) hope i keep my laziness aside and type it soon!!
    and thanks re :)

    @Seema Ji its good to see you here Seema Ji :) and i am very glad you liked my lines :) thanks!

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  7. Arre that place where she is lying next to him. In the verandah or someplace. When they were young. Don't know why...woh part yaad aa gaya.
    Aah jaldi dikhana!!!

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  8. ohhh... that tree house wala incident. to think of it. yesss... i think you have a point there!!
    and yaar... its very short.....
    than my usual standards i mean :P :P
    just 3 and half pages long... and abhi tak typing start nahi ki :P

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  9. So beautifully worded..wish I could play with words to express like this.

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  10. you play with words in your own beautiful way Kajal Ji :) i am glad you liked this poem. it is something very close to my heart :)

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  11. touching poem.. :D And yea, I too wish I could write such beautifully... :(

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